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I need to work on linking my analysis back to my points and I need to have a more detailed argument with different points (not just about budget). On question one I need to comment on editing more and to use correct terms such as diegetic dialogue instead of non diegetic dialogue. I need to not write about the characters only and expand to make a statement about race. I should try to avoid comments on colour of costumes etc as it is very basic.
Question 1
EAA: 13/20
Examples: 15/20
Terminology: 7/10
Overall: 35/50 Grade: B
Question 2
EAA: 14/20
Examples: 16/20
Terminology: 8/10
Overall: 38/50 Grade: B
Overall
73/100 Grade: B
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