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Success:- Music went well with the sequence as it suited the characters movements as well as the cuts from one character to another.
- Record scratch went well with the action at 0:32 as it lightened the mood of the sequence.
- Use of Camera Angles such as the mid shots.
- Very clear establishing pattern between the characters. (Low shot, Mid Shot, Tracking Shot)
- Match on action (3 different shots of parcel) at 0:20 and 0:21.
- Did not break the 180 degree rule.
Improvements:
- Dialogue shot needs a cut to a different angle as it is too long.
- Match on action needed on the pushing action at 0:33
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